I believe Spindle was once lost. His father's name is Leviticus. His mother died giving birth to him and his twin sister. When Spindle was a baby, a wizard names Moredock ran away with the new born prince. He had thought he would give the boy to Zorbed, the evil leader of the rebellion in Brauna. It was he that had made the Pans (half panda bear and half sumo wrestler). The pans terrorize children. They stalk them during the night time. When a child is asleep the Pans grab them and run off with them. Ever since Whahnkahn Kahnkahn, the very first Pan that Zorbed made, was created, children have feared Pans. Whahnkahn Kahnkahn's spouse was the second Pan that Zorbed created. Her name was Zhorbahs Bahsbahs. Of coarse, since Zorbed was not the creator, his "creations" were only perversions of the creators orignal work and creatures. Therefor the Pans lives were very limited; they were evil none-the-less.
Zorbed also made a creature called the Chanz. It had the head of a cheetah, body of a man, feet of a dragon, arms of a bear, and wings of an eagle.
Does this all sound interesting? It is a part of the story that I am writing! Maybe I'll post my first chapter here someday.
1 comment:
I like your story, Wolfling. I think someday you will write like Christopher Paoli (you know, the writer of "Eragon"), but you will always have someone like Aslan in your stories. And I am sure good and evil will be more defined.
Papa is looking for me to come and help him, so I need to make this short today.
Love you much,
Myma Wolf
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